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First opportunity to shoot with Ole Miss Model: Shayna Ruth
MM account: [link]
Camera: Nikon D3S (tripod mostly)
Lens: Nikon AF-S 70-200mm 1:2.8G
Flash: Nikon SB900 speed lights in Lastolite EZ-Boxes
Shoot at day's end - all locations shaded from sun - most images in the series shot with the soft box flash, but some shots without
Photography: Dunlap PhotoArt
MM account: [link]
Camera: Nikon D3S (tripod mostly)
Lens: Nikon AF-S 70-200mm 1:2.8G
Flash: Nikon SB900 speed lights in Lastolite EZ-Boxes
Shoot at day's end - all locations shaded from sun - most images in the series shot with the soft box flash, but some shots without
Photography: Dunlap PhotoArt
Image size
2000x1005px 354.81 KB
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique
ImpactLet's try to ignore the fact that your model is simply stunning.
The pose you've achieved is wonderful - pointed toes, relaxed hands, great eye contact. I like that all of the foreground is in focus and drops immediately to the blurred background - it keeps your focus where it should be and doesn't look the least bit unnatural. The pocket of light in the corner highlighting the hair is a nice compositional touch.
As for what I might do differently, there isn't much. The eyes seem a little bit soft compared to the rest of the body, but it's only visible zoomed in. Maybe a soft blur on the skirt to reduce the wrinkles a bit, and there seems to be something white inside the top that could be burned a bit to match the rest of the fabric.
Overall, this is great work and a shot I wold be proud to have made.